文档介绍：Teaching Design
白银市平川中学 周有勤
Teaching content： How to improve our writing language
Teaching aims： This class I’m familiar with Beijing. It is important for the work.
If you give me the chance, I’ll try my best to offer the best service to others. Please accept my application. I won’t disappoint you！
Looking forward to your reply。
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
Ⅲ。 Finding out the problems in the passage
1。 The same subject “I”
2. Simple ＆ repeated words “be good at" & “ like”
Simple ＆ repeated sentence patterns “ I’m…"
No necessary transitions except “and”
Ⅳ. Putting forward the possible ways to improve
1。 Change the subjects
2. Use the advanced words and phrases
3。 Use varieties of sentence patterns
4。 Use proper transitions
Ⅴ。 Practising the ways by using detailed examples
1。 Change the subject 改变主语：
I’ll offer the best service to others.
→ Offering the best service to others is my goal。（用—ing形式做主语)
→ It is my goal to offer the best service to others。 。(用It做主语)
2. Choose advanced phrases 选取高级词汇：
I like sports. → be fond of / be interested in / be crazy about
This is important for the work。→ be of great importance
I’ll try my best to offer the best se