文档介绍：高考英语作文
得分亮点的诀窍
How to improve your writing
首句亮点化
词汇高级化
句式多样化
布局谋篇合理化
首句亮点化
绝对无误
开门见山
先自然再求美
词汇高级化
高级词汇---
能给人新颖、特别的感觉
使阅卷者对考生的英语功底有一定程度的了解
注:并不是越难越好、越长越好,关键在于恰到好处地使用那些符合英美国家习惯的表达方式,如短语和惯用语等。
new railway is being built in my hometown.
A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
of my classmates are for the movie.
Some of my classmates are in favor of the movie.
strong storm happened in our city last night.
A strong storm hit/struck our city last night.
⑴Because the weather was good, our journey fortable.
our journey fortable.
⑵We all think he is a great man.
⑶Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
Thanks to the good weather,
We all think highly of him .
A good idea occurred to me.
A good idea suddenly struck me.
练一练-学会使用高级词汇
⑷The students there needn’t pay for their books.
⑸As a result the plan was a failure.
⑹When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.
she went pale with sorrow.
⑺She went to Austria in order to study music.
She went to Austria
Books are free for the students there.
The plan turned out (to be) a failure.
At the news of his death,
for/with the purpose of studying music.
⑻After the operation, he felt better and better.
⑼In our team, there are twenty–six players.
⑽You can find my house easily.
He was recovering after the operation .
Our team is made up of /consists of twenty–six players .
Twenty–six players make up our team.
You’ll have no trouble/difficulty finding my house.
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