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雅思写作内容及评分标准之：连贯性及一致性
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雅思写作内容及评分标准之：连贯性及全都性
he tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.
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本段的写法是由远及近，从远处(from a distance)写起，然后get closer，再到( ten feet away)，最终是inside the pagoda……当然，按方位远近来写不等于都是由远及近。依据需要，也能够由近及远，由外至内等等。
(logical arrangement)
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
这一段谈的是表达力量，它的重要性与工作，身份有关，从not need much skill或of little importance到more important，最终是most important。
行文的规律性经常要靠恰当的变换词语及其他手法来完成。
Walters goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies --- in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, during his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to