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雅思A类大作文高分范文
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2021年1月12日雅思A类大作文高分范文购物中心和公园健身设施，什么才是一座新城市更需要的 centers is for people to buy various goods, but in todays world where on-line shopping is becoming increasingly prevalent, the role of physical stores seems to be weakened Large shopping centers can also include some leisure facilities such as cafés and cinemas, but these are not as important as parks and sports centers
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相比之下,购物中心的主要功能是为人们购买各种各样的商品,但在今日的世界里,网上购物变得越来越流行,实体店的作用好像减弱了大型购物中心也可以包括一些咖啡馆和电影院等休闲设施,但这些都不是公园和体育中心一样重要
To conclude, in the process of urban planning and construction, building parks and sports facilities should be emphasized, in comparison to develop ing.
总之，在城市规划和建设过程中，公园和体育设施的建设应当被强调，而不是进展。
2021年1月12日雅思大作文真题范文新城市应当建更多的公园还是购物中心
雅思大作文写作真题：新城市应当建更多的公园还是购物中心 When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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题目
When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文解析
本题属于社会生活类话题。争论是否需要建筑更多的公园和体育设施而非购物中心让人们度过空闲时间。考生在思索论点时需要涉及到两方论点的回应，且对于关键短语“spend free time〞的回应也不行缺失。
文章结构
P1：引入话题+表明观点
P2：阐述建筑更多体育设施对于人们度过空余时间的必要性;
P3：阐述建筑更多公园对于人们度过空余时间的必要性;
P4：承认人们也可以在购物中心消磨时间，但是非全部人都可以采纳这种方式。
P5：总结：重申观点和概括文章论点。
高分话题表达
restrain from 抑制
contract diseases 患疾病
relieve of 从。。。。。。解脱
escape from 逃离
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immune system 免疫体系
blood circulation 血液循环
is a preferable choice 是一个受宠爱的选择
Despite this,… 尽管如此
affordability 购买力
lead a healthy lifestyle 引领健康的生活方式
高分结构
It is recommended/conceivable that… 主语从句
for the reason that… 同位语从句
…, which is conducive to… 非限定定语从句