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On the first day of school, I stared in amazement at the enormous buildings. This high school was unquestionably larger than the one I had formerly gone to. It was my second year of high school but my first in St. PauPs School The previous night, I had determined that I would be far happier in a new school if I befriended the so-called “popular” kids. Socializing with the right crowd would surely enhance my life. I even purchased a new set of clothes and had my hair done to ensure the first day would be perfect.
Nervous yet eager to start my new life, I went up the stairs to the front entrance. The hallways were filled with children shouting, laughing, and sharing tales of their summer vacations. My first class was geometry, but I had no idea where it was.
As I stood in the hall looking confused, a short, blonde girl with glasses approached and inquired, "Are you new? You seem lost. Do you need assistance? My name is Diane. What's yours?” Although she appeared a bit strange and was not the type of person I wanted to befriend, I decided to reply since I was indeed lost.
After introducing ourselves, I followed her up the stairs and along a hallway on the right, making small talk all the while. When we arrived at my classroom, she said, “Well, here you are. Welcome to our school, and I hope your day goes smoothly.”
I thanked her and waved goodbye. Once inside the classroom, I noticed a large group of people gathered around someone who seemed to be telling a story. I walked over and got close enough to listen in. Everyone's attention was fixed on the guy in the middle of the circle wearing a letter jacket covered with patches. I judged that this guy must be popular, so I managed to secure a seat right next to him and said, "Hi, my name is Sara and I'm new here." He replied, "Michael.”
注意：L续写词数应为150个左右； 答。
At the end of the class, I turned to him and asked JTm not sure where my next class is, could you help me?”
Just when I was about to cry, someone came up and patted me on the shoulder.
新学校友谊的故事续写
续写分析（两段）
第一段：此段围绕“我”向自认为受欢迎的迈克尔求助展开。“Attheendof the class, I turned to him and asked../9 表明“我”的求助行为，而迈克尔“gave me a quick glance and shrugged. "Sorry, Vm in a hurry. Maybe you should figure it out yourself/ he said coldly.^的反应，通过动作和语言描写，生动展现出他的冷漠， 与“我”之前对受欢迎群体的期待形成强烈反差。"I was left standing there, feeling embarrassed and a bit lost."细致地刻画了 “我”被拒绝后的尴尬与迷茫， 体现出“我”内心的受挫。接着描述“我”在走廊寻求帮助的经历，“As I wandered through the crowded hallways, asking around for directions, I received impatient or unhelpful responses/5进一步强化了 “我”的困境，也让“我”开始反 思自己只追求与受欢迎的人交朋友的计划，推动故事朝着“我”重新审视友谊的 方向发展。
第二段：以“我”陷入困境时的转机开篇，“Just when I was about to cry, someone came up and patted me on the shoulder.” 营造出紧张后的舒缓氛围。当看 至I是戴安时，力 turned around and saw Diane. "Hey, I thought you might need some help again. I saw you looking a bit lost/ she said with a warm smile.” 戴安的语言和 微笑展现出她的善良与细心。"Relief flooded over me.”真实地表达出“我”此时 的感受。在戴安引导“我"去下一个教室的过程中「She patiently guided me to my next class, chatting along the way.”体现出她的耐心与友好。最后"我”的感悟，力 realized then that true kindness and friendship didn't come from the so - called popular crowd. Diane, with her genuine concern, was the one who made me feel welcome in this new school. From that day on, I decided to value real connections over chasing popularity/9点明主题，通过“我”对友谊认知的转变，突出了真正 的友谊来自真诚的关心，而非所谓的受欢迎程度。
故事线
“我”升入新高中，认为与受欢迎的孩子交朋友能让自己更快乐，为了在新 学校的第一天表现完美，购买新衣服并做了头发。
在学校，“我”因找不到几何教室而迷茫，戴安主动帮忙，将“我”带到教 室。
在教室，“我”看到一群人围着穿着带有补丁的字母夹克的迈克尔，认为他 很受欢迎，便坐在他旁边并打招呼，下课后向他求助找下一个教室，却遭到冷漠 拒绝。
“我”在走廊寻求他人帮助无果，陷入困境，几乎要哭时，戴安再次出现， 热心地帮助“我”找到下一个教室，“我”由此认识到真正的友谊来自真诚的人， 决定不再只追逐受欢迎的人，而是重视真正的人际关系。
短语
turn to
give sb. a quick glance 快速瞥某人一眼
shrug耸肩
be in a hurry 匆忙
figure out弄清楚
wander through 徘徊
ask around四处询问
a warm smile温暖的微笑
flood over 涌上
chat along the way 一路 上聊天
so - called所谓的
value real connections重视真正的人际关系
主旨升华句
This heartwarming narrative of friendship's discovery in a new school not only showcases the unexpected nature of true connections but also serves as a poignant reminder that in our pursuit of acceptance, we often overlook the simple acts of kindness that hold the key to genuine relationships.
这个在新学校中发现友谊的温馨故事，不仅展示了真正联系的意外性，还深 刻地提醒我们，在追求被接纳的过程中，我们常常忽视那些简单的善良行为，而 这些行为正是建立真正关系的关键。
Through the protagonist^ journey from chasing popularity to embracing the warmth of a sincere friendship, we are vividly shown the transformative power of a change in perspective and the beauty of recognizing that true friends are those who offer a helping hand, regardless of social status.
通过主人公从追逐受欢迎程度到拥抱真诚友谊温暖的历程，我们生动地看到 了视角转变的变革力量，以及认识到真正的朋友是那些伸出援手的人，而不论其 社会地位如何的美好。
The story of Sara in the new school is not merely a tale of a student's first - day experiences; it is a profound exploration of the human desire for connection, the misjudgment of friendship based on popularity, and the eventual realization that true friendship is a precious gem hidden in the most unexpected places.
萨拉在新学校的故事不仅仅是一个学生第一天经历的故事，它是对人类渴望 联系、基于受欢迎程度对友谊的错误判断，以及最终认识到真正的友谊是一颗隐 藏在最意想不到地方的珍贵宝石的深刻探索。
In a world often driven by the pursuit of popularity and social status, Sara's encounter with Diane and Michael stands as a powerful statement, illuminating the path towards a more meaningful understanding of friendship. It reminds us that kindness, not popularity, is the currency that enriches our lives.
在一个常常被追求受欢迎程度和社会地位所驱动的世界里，萨拉与戴安和迈 克尔的相遇是一个有力的声明，照亮了通往对友谊更有意义理解的道路。它提醒 我们，善良，而不是受欢迎程度，才是丰富我们生活的财富。
From the initial misguided belief in the allure of popularity to the final epiphany about the value of real connections, the story encapsulates the essence of growth, the power of positive influence, and the unwavering belief that true friendship can turn an unfamiliar place into a home.
从最初对受欢迎魅力的错误信念到最终对真正联系价值的顿悟，这个故事体 现了成长的本质、积极影响的力量，以及坚定的信念，即真正的友谊可以将一个 陌生的地方变成家。
写作示范
示范一
At the end of the class, I turned to him and asked, "Tm not sure where my next class is, could you help me?” Michael barely looked at me and scoffed, "Can't you see Pm busy? Go ask someone else." His harsh words stung, and I felt a lump form in my throat. I trudged through the bustling hallways, my heart heavy. Everywhere I turned, people seemed too preoccupied to help. I began to question my entire approach. Was popularity really worth all this humiliation?
Just when I was about to give up, someone came up and patted me on the shoulder. I spun around to see Diane. "Hey, I thought you could use a hand. I know how confusing this place can be J she said, her eyes twinkling. A wave of gratitude washed over me. As she led me to my class, she shared funny stories about the school. I realized then that true friendship wasn't about status. Diane's kindness was a beacon in the darkness, and I decided to cherish this new - found connection.
示范二
At the end of the class, I turned to him and asked JTm not sure where my next class is, could you help me?” Michael rolled his eyes and replied, "I don't have time fbr this. You should have figured out your schedule by now." I was left red - faced and humiliated. I tried asking other students, but they either ignored me or gave me vague directions. I felt like an outsider, completely lost in this new environment. I started to think that maybe my plan to befriend the popular kids was a huge mistake.
Just when I was on the verge of tears, someone came up and patted me on the shoulder. It was Diane. "Hey, I saw you looking lost again. Let me help you out,“ she said with a kind smile. I let out a sigh of relief. As we walked, she pointed out different classrooms and told me about the teachers. I finally understood that popularity didn't equate to kindness. Diane was the one who made me feel at home in this new school, and I made up my mind to focus on building real friendships like this
one.
【答案】
At the end of the class, I turned to him and asked JTm not sure where my next class is, could you help me?” With a frown, he looked at me and then said a quick no, turned back to his friends, and walked out of the classroom. As they were walking out I heard him say, “Did you guys see that new girl trying to get into our group? That outfit's too strange. "They all laughed and some of them turned around and stared at me. My face hot with shame, I stood stock-still, not believing what had just happened.
Just when I was about to cry, someone came up and patted me on the shoulder. It was Diane. Like a ray of sunshine, the big smile on her face swept away my gloom. I struggled to hold my feelings back and told her what I had encountered. A gleam of concern in her eyes, she said she was sorry and offered to find my next class. At that moment I realized how wrong I was in wanting to only be friends with popular people. Maybe I shouldn't decide whether a person is worth being my friend or not by their reputation, but by who they are.