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Maggie and Alex live in a tall building in a neighborhood in the center of the city. There are no trees near their building, but they are happy in their home and it is close to their jobs.
In the part of the city where they live, there is not much fresh food to buy. The stores only have processed foods in packages. Maggie and Alex and all the other people in the building have to eat food that they buy in boxes and plastic containers.
This makes so much garbage that no one knows where to put it. While they wait for Fridays, when the city collects the garbage, all the neighbors put their trash into bags and sometimes leave it in the hallway or on the big, sunny roof. The whole building looks terrible. No one can spend time playing on the roof because it is full of trash.
One day, Maggie and Alex decide to make a change. They go up to the roof and separate all the recycla-ble garbage, like cardboard, plastic bottles, glass, and aluminum cans. Then they take all of the garbage down to the street for the garbage collectors.
But they do not carry down the plastic bottles! They cut off the tops and use them as pots to plant tomatoes and carrots. They plant herbs, too.
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Maggie and Alex tell their neighbors about their project.
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Now the roof looks beautiful like a garden.
一、文本主旨
本文讲述了 Maggie和Alex居住在城市中心的一栋高楼里，周围没有树木，且由于附近商店 只售卖加工食品，导致他们产生了大量垃圾。为了解决垃圾问题，他们决定利用屋顶空间, 将塑料瓶改造成种植容器，种植蔬菜和香草。这一创新举措不仅解决了垃圾问题，还为屋顶
带来了生机。
二、五要素分析
.人物(Characters)
Maggie和Alex：故事的主角，居住在城市中心的高楼里，对环境问题有责任感。
邻居们：居住在同一栋楼的居民，最初对垃圾问题无动于衷，但后来被Maggie和Alex的行 动所影响。
.时间(Time)
时间背景：未明确提及具体时间，但从上下文可以推测是现代城市生活背景。
.地点(Place)
主要地点：城市中心的一栋高楼及其屋顶。
.事件(Event)
主要事件：Maggie和Alex决定利用屋顶空间，将塑料瓶改造成种植容器，种植蔬菜和香草, 解决垃圾问题，并最终带动邻居们一起参与。
.原因(Reason)
原因：城市中心缺乏新鲜食物，居民们产生的垃圾过多，导致垃圾堆积问题严重。Maggie 和Alex希望通过创新方式解决这一问题。
三、词汇积累
短语
fresh food (新鲜食物)
processed foods (加工食品)
plastic containers (塑料容器)
recyclable garbage （可回收垃圾）
cardboard （纸板）
aluminum cans （铝罐）
plant tomatoes and carrots （种植西红柿和胡萝卜）
herbs （香草）
separate the garbage （分类垃圾）
garbage collectors （垃圾收集者）
tell neighbors （告诉邻居）
make a change （做出 改变）
beautiful garden （美丽的花园）
community effort （社区努力）
reduce waste （减少浪费）
urban living （城市生活）
environmental impact （环境影响）
positive influence （积极影响）
佳句
Living in the city center, Maggie and Alex had to deal with a lot of garbage.
They decided to make a change by recycling and reusing materials.
Cutting off the tops of plastic bottles, they used them as pots for planting.
Maggie and Alex told their neighbors about their project, hoping to inspire them.
The roof began to look like a beautiful garden, full of life.
Their efforts not only reduced waste but also beautified the building.
The community effort led to a cleaner and more sustainable living environment.
Maggie and Alex's project had a positive influence on their neighbors.
They realized that small changes could make a big difference.
The roof garden became a place where neighbors could gather and enjoy nature.
By planting vegetables and herbs, they were able to have fresh food.
The project showed that urban living could be more sustainable.
Maggie and Alex's initiative led to a stronger sense of community.
The beautiful garden on the roof became a symbol of their environmental efforts.
Their project demonstrated the power of collective action.
四、续写分析
(-)衔接句
Maggie and Alex tell their neighbors about their project. (Maggie 和 Alex 告诉他们的邻居关于 他们的项目。)
这句话为续写部分设定了一个积极的行动方向，即Maggie和Alex开始向邻居们介绍他们的 环保项目。
Now the roof looks beautiful like a garden.（现在屋顶看起来像一个美丽的花园。）
这句话为续写部分设定了一个积极的结果，即屋顶的环境得到了改善，变成了一个美丽的花 园。
（二）情节合理性
邻居的反应：Maggie和Alex向邻居们介绍项目后，邻居们可能会有不同的反应，有的可能 会积极参与，有的可能会持观望态度。
花园的建设：随着项目的推进，屋顶逐渐变成了一个美丽的花园，这不仅解决了垃圾问题, 还为居民们提供了一个休闲和交流的场所。
（三）情感铺垫
积极的改变：Maggie和Alex的行动带来了积极的变化，这种情感需要在续写中体现。
社区的团结：通过共同的努力，社区居民之间的关系变得更加紧密，这种情感转变需要通过 续写来合理展开。
五、情感走向
积极的改变：Maggie和Alex的行动带来了积极的变化，解决了垃圾问题，美化了环境。
社区的团结：通过共同的努力，社区居民之间的关系变得更加紧密，形成了一个更加和谐的 社区。
环保意识的提升：居民们通过参与项目，提高了环保意识，认识到小改变可以带来大影响。
六、主题深化
环保与创新：通过Maggie和Alex的行动，展示了环保和创新的重要性。
社区的力量：通过社区居民的共同努力，展示了集体行动的力量。
可持续生活：通过屋顶花园的建设，展示了城市生活中可持续生活的可能性。
七、下水文
(一)版本一
Paragraph 1: Maggie and Alex tell their neighbors about their project. They explain how they recycled plastic bottles and used them as pots for planting vegetables and herbs. Their enthusiasm is contagious, and many neighbors are inspired to join in. Together, they clean up the roof and start planting more vegetables and flowers. The community effort not only reduces waste but also brings people closer together.
Paragraph 2: Now the roof looks beautiful like a garden. It is full of colorful flowers, fresh vegetables, and aromatic herbs. The once - trash - filled roof has been transformed into a green oasis where neighbors can relax and enjoy nature. The project has had a positive influence on the community, and people are more conscious about reducing waste and living sustainably. The roof garden has become a symbol of their collective effort and a place where they can gather and share their experiences.
(—)版本二
Paragraph 1: Maggie and Alex tell their neighbors about their project. They show them the plastic bottles they have turned into pots and explain how it helps reduce waste. Many neighbors are curious and excited to try it themselves. They start a community effort to clean up the roof and plant more vegetables and flowers. The project brings the community together, and people begin to see the potential of their shared space.
Paragraph 2: Now the roof looks beautiful like a garden. It is a vibrant and lively space filled with green plants and colorful flowers. The transformation has not only improved the appearance of the building but also created a sense of community. Neighbors gather on the roof to tend to their plants and share stories. The project has shown that small changes can make a big difference, and it has inspired others to think creatively about reducing waste and living more sustainably.
【答案】Paragraph 1:
Maggie and Alex tell their neighbors about their project. Their neighbors get very excited. Whenever they have free time after work or on the weekends, all the neighbors go up to the roof. They enjoy the sun and help take care of the plants in the garden. They all cooperate, and by working together, they soon have a big, beautiful vegetable garden!
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Now the roof looks beautiful like a garden. They spend time in their community garden, enjoy the sun, and create much less garbage. In fact, they even save money because they do not have to buy so much packaged food. The garden is a real success, and the building in the center of the city is a much nicer place to live because of it. All of the neighbors safeguard their environment and improve it for themselves and for each other.