文档介绍：English Writing
A visit to a farm
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm e. Then the owner of the farm showed us around. We were so pleased to see the fruit and vegetables growing well! At noon we had a ic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. we had to say good-bye to the workers at 5:00. We really enjoyed ourselves there!
中考高分范文
假设你叫Sally,刚刚度完暑假。你的英国朋友Annie给你
发来了一封电子邮件想了解你是如何度过假期的。
你准备给她回信,信的要点如下,词数约80左右,开头
已给出。
。
2. 在暑假期间,开始学习弹吉他。
3. 经常与同学一起去游泳。
4. 还与父母一起去了一个小岛上度假。
一起分享照片。
Dear Annie :
I am so happy to receive your email.
…
Yours
Sally
准备工作
①.仔细审题,明确要求。
确定时态,审清题意,列出要点。
②.紧扣要点,寻求思路。
草拟提纲,确定开头,根据内容写下一些短语或句子,拟好结尾(可适当发表自己的观点)。
写作之中
①.开门见山,紧扣主题。
②.语言正确, 规范地道。
参观农场的日记:
关于度假:
句型、结构,避免中国式英语。
I spent 10 yuan buy the book.
He by bike to school.
标点符号
Last Sunday we visited West Hill Farm.
We had a wonderful holiday in Jiaxin last weekend.
③.重短轻长, 就易避难, 巧用绕障法。
④.过渡自然, 表达流畅。
以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。
You should keep quiet in the library.
正确使用连词,保持行文的流畅。
She is seven years old, she can speak three languages.
不重复使用可置换的词。
⑤.适当评论, 发表己见。
How friendly they are!
We can learn from them.
They enjoyed themselves very much.
What a happy family!
一般语法项目的检查
人称: Mr. Green works hard, she is the best worker in their office.
时态: One day, they are going to the island.
主谓一致: Everyone in our class work hard.
习惯用法: He helps me in my English.
符合习惯
My work is very busy.
I very much like it.
I’m very busy with my work.
I like it very much.