文档介绍：大连雅思培训之雅思写作十大失败开头总结
看到这个标题是不是就感觉膝盖中了一枪……
这篇文章总结了一些常见的错误……
看看就好,别背这些啊…………
坑已经告诉你了，再往里面跳就是你的不对了……
典型失败案例：
Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married？
This topic is very interesting. I'm very interested in talking about thistopic。 Because I'm also a college student and I'm not married……
修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题
n my opinion， it would not be a wise decision to allow college students toget married。
Topic 2-Will modern technology， such as the Internet， ever replace the bookor the writing word as the sole source of information？ （雅思真题)
Ok， this topic is a very good topic. First， let me tell you a story： I havea friend， he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet toread news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and moreimportant in our daily life。
Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it？ Of course! It’s reallyvery very important!
“见官死”开头之二：中式英文人见人晕 (喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life， there are always some moments which make your heart floweropened angrily……
Topic 2— The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the citycenters of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic3— Is there fairness in today's business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no