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文档介绍:2/ 8/ :In many parts of the world,children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening?How should they be punished?
Today,news about youth crime is rife. Theft,burglary or even murder are now committed by people of younger and younger ages. The aim of this essay is to investigate the factors responsible for the increase in juvenile delinquency and put forward a number of ways to appropriately punish young offenders.
It is observed that extreme behaviors are exhibited by most children from dysfunctional families. Without the supervision from parents or caregivers,children’s extreme behaviors such as aggression,hostility or defiance are given free rein to develop in their later lives. In addition,there is a direct correlation between the lack of engagement in educational activities and serious criminal offending in children. Out of boredom,children befriend with antisocial peers and will gradually copy their behaviors. Media also plays an enormous role in shaping children’s criminality. For example,games such as grand theft auto can desensitise younger players to extreme acts of violence and cruelty,encourage them to commit crimes while giving them the impression that it is morally acceptable to do so.
Imprisonment is often cited as a way to punish juvenile offenders. However,it is my view that this approach can produce extremely destructive effects. The youth can potentially be victims of physical or sexual abuse from older prisoners,as well as can adopt their negative behaviors. I feel that the better cure for young criminals is rehabilitation. Throughout education and training,the youth can realise their wrongful actions and be given opportunities to turn over a new leaf and transform themselves into useful members of society later in life.
There are reasons to explain why today antisocial behavior among the youth nowadays has reached a historically unprecedented high and rehabilitation is the answer for this.
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