文档介绍：凌云级书面表达(五)
你叫李华。最近,你们班同学就“地球一小时”活动展开了一场热烈盼讨论。下表是这次讨论的结果。请你用英语给《中学英语报》主编写一封信,介绍你们班的讨论结果并阐明你自己的观点。
60%的同学支持
40%的同学反对
你的看法
引起人们对全球气候变暖的关注
做秀,意义不大
……
节约能源
收效甚微
全世界共同努力,保护地球
给人们生活,学习和工作带来不便
……
……
…
, 句式多样性;避免汉式英语(不写没把握的句子和词组)
, 条理清楚;正确使用连接词。
、习惯用法、单词拼写等方面的错误。
。
,注意要点,以免遗漏;可以先将重要词组、句型列出,再开始写作。
注意
1. 部分同学书写较差,卷面不整洁,思维混乱,涂改较多(严禁在考试中使用涂改液、带、纸等)---屡教不改会吃亏的。
2. 遗漏要点(注意试卷中的“……”)---审题不仔细。
3. 拼写错误、词组搭配错误。
4. 答题前没列提纲,结构混乱,思维混乱
,建议书面表达答题时间为25-30分钟。
存在问题
* 60 percents of students; most of student;
60 percent of the students; most of the students
* There were 60 % students agree the activity
while there were 40% students held the opposite
view.
*40 % of students in our class against the activity.
*Fourty percents of students are disagree with it.
Forty percent of the students diagree with it.
典型错误
with
are
the
attach/ attack more people to the problem
Their opinion are list as follow.
Their opinions are listed as follows.
As far as I concerned, ----
They think the activity like a show.
Not only the students in favor of Earth Hour, but also many students didn’t.
(表达不清,后半句没法改)
典型错误
am
attract
is
are
The affect of the activity is too small.
We should make effect together to protect the earth
take inconvenience to people’s live, studies and works
on / to my opinion.
pay more attention on the issue.
effect
efforts
cause/bring
work
life
study
in
to
典型错误
要点1:60%的同学支持;40%的同学反对
Sixty percent of the students are for the idea that…, while forty percent of the students think otherwise.
Sixty percent students agreed, for they thought it …However, sixty percent of us were against it. They said …
About 60% of the students are in favor of it.
List the key points
要点2:引起人们对全球气候变暖的关注
raise people’s awareness of global warming
pay much attention to global warming
care more about global warming
be aware of global warming
be concerned about global warming
List the key poi