雅思写作提分5点要求.docx

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对于很多备考雅思写作的同学，经常能遭遇到总突破不了高分的困境。单词，模板，万能句式什么的都没少背，为什么还不能提高呢?今天我给大家带来了雅思写作提分五点要求,希望能够帮助到大家，一起来学****吧。
雅选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则。
，一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如：


The situation that resulted in my grandfathers not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.
从意思上来分析，上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfathers not being able to study”.
在表达这个概念时，原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的重点概念，可以改为下面这句话：
My grandfather couldnt study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.
，避免频繁使用“there be”结构。
例如：There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.
可以改为：
My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.
更简洁的句式为：
My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.
，把从句改为短语或单词。
例如：Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located101 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.


简洁的表达方式为：
The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 101 kilometers to the nearest university.
，仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候，才使用被动语态。
例如：In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay