文档介绍：书面表达专题(六)
学生,是江苏中学的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题,根据下面所给出的要点提示,用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。
要点提示:
:祖国、家乡、学校,热爱关心;
:家人、师长、同学,诚信互助;
:能源、环境、动植物,爱惜保护;
:(内容由考生自己拟定)。
注意::100左右。倡议书的开头、结尾以及提示句已为你写好,不计入词数;
,注意行文连贯。
[学生习作]
A Letter to High School Students in Jiangsu
Dear fellow students,
Our government is aiming to build a“harmonious society”.I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.
As high school students,what should we do?First of all,as members of society,we must build unity of munity and nation,and should love and care for them,as well as for our city and ,we should believe in our families,teachers and make our society harmonious,we'd better take care of the environment we live is to say,we are responsible to protect the animals and plants and to save evergy.
As for myself,I will make every effort to do things better from now on,from small things around present,the most important thing for me is to make a contribution to our society by studying hard and learning to be a good citizen.
Dear fellow students,let's start fighting now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day,every hour,and every minute!
Li Xiaoping
From Jiangsu High School
(1)文章开篇用aim to do结构阐述了倡议书的目的,同时运用了it作形式主语,不定式作真正主语结构,使表达效果更佳。
(2)第二段运用first of all,then,that is to say等关联词,清楚地表述了作为高中生应当做的努力,并且使前后衔接自然。
[教师点评]
(3)第三段阐述了自己要起的作用,阐明了自己的态度。末句不定式作表语及make a contribution to的运用为本段一大亮点。
(4)最后一段呼应开头,发出倡议,使文章首尾连贯。
总之,本文不管是从结构(发出倡议→如何做→提出号召)上,还是遣词造句上(既有好的句式结构,又有高级词汇及适时添加的关联词),都不失为一篇优秀的作文。
(二)
为了丰富外国留学生的生活,你校学生会将举办一次音乐周活动。请你以组织者的身份写一个书面通知书。有关内容如下:
时间:5月第1周
活动::流行歌曲
:古典和民间音乐
:听歌曲片断,然后猜出处
地点:届时通知
参加者请于4月20日前报名。
注意:;
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:古典classical;民间folk;
乐器musical instruments;比赛contest
April 10,2010