文档介绍：书面表达专题(七)
学生习作点评
(一)
目前,学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生证文,标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations。”请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。
主要原因
考试偏多、偏难
不用功、懒惰
取悦父母、老师
个人看法
作弊不对,违反校规
要诚实,努力学习
……(其他看法)
注意:,可适当发挥;
,不计入总词数;
:100左右。
:作弊cheat(v.)
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in
[学生习作]
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.
As students,we often take examinations at school,but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for the other hand,some of the students are lazy and don't work hard at their when taking examinations,they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.
In my opinion,it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in 's more,we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.
[教师点评]
①本文开门见山指出一些学生在考试中作弊的现象,然后分析其原因,最后得出结论,提出自己的看法。文章具有很强的逻辑性。
②考生多处使用了较为高级的句式结构,如which引导的定语从句,because引导的原因状语从句等。
③本文多处适时采用了承上启下的过渡语(如on the other hand,so,in my opinion,what's more等),使得文章衔接自然。
(二)
当前有不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影,有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book,which do you prefer?”为题,按照下列要点写一篇英语短文:
:省时、有趣、易懂
:细节更多、语言优美

注意:~120,文章题目和开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
:original work或book in the original(原著)
Film or Book,Which Do You Prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the
[学生习作]
Film or Book,Which Do You Prefer?
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the ①film②is can save much it is more interesting than book③.And it is easy④to be understood⑤.Bu