文档介绍：英语写作——推荐信
XX英英词典，感觉非常实用，请你利用英语班会时间向同学们推荐它。内容要点如下：
1. 特色（如词汇量，用法，例句等方面）；
2. 使用心得
Hello, everyone!
…………………………………………………..
Thank you for listening.
审题
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Outline
要点3: 使用心得 (总结陈词，再次点题)
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Para. 2
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提炼信息列提纲
明确主次分段落
背景：
在班会课上向同学推荐一本英英词典
要点1：表明写作目的 (推荐词典)
要点2: 特色 (如词汇量，用法，例句等方面)
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How to improve it?
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua, studying in an international school. I’m very glad that I have a chance to show something in this class meeting.
recommend /introduce an English-English dictionary to you
信件的开头注意明确对象，开门见山！
Para 1: 信件开头怎么写?
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Good samples:
Hello, everyone! Today I would like to recommend an English-English dictionary to you in this class meeting.(邱怀彬)
Hello, everyone! In this class, I want to introduce a new English dictionary whose name is Happy Dictionary. I think it is very suitable for senior high school students.(沈晴)
Hello, everyone! Recently I bought a new Oxford English-English dictionary and I found it is very worthwhile to buy it, so I want to introduce it to all of you today .(郭安琪)
开门见山，简练切题！
明确主题，简要拓展！
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Para 2：如何描述词典的特色?（如词汇量，用法，例句等方面）
本词典的特色：
词汇量大
用法解释详细
例句容易理解
结果：
篇幅简短，内容单薄，无法体现语言表达能力。
对策：
对要点进行合理拓展，使内容丰满，详略得当！遇到翻译难点，则转换表达方式！
※如果简单罗列：
large vocabulary
detailed explanation of usage
example sentences that are easy to understand
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Para. 2：如何描述词典的特色?（如词汇量，用法，例句等方面）；
(vocabulary) First, it has a large vocabulary, with more than 1000 new words added, which is indeed a help to us. And the words are explained in details. (魏琪敏)
(usage) Secondly, the dictionary shows us different ways to use the words so that we can use the words correctly when writing English articles. (马泽华)
(example sentence) The example sentences are easy to understand, which helps us have a better understanding of a certain word. (陈晓杉)
阐述要点，延伸细节
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How to improve it?
Para 2：如何描述词典的特色?
First of all, the dictionary has a large vocabulary, which contain 3500 words we shoul