雅思作文批改范例.pdf

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Sample Essay
批注 [7writing5]: There is also more
than one difference between the two
(*This paragraph lacks development. There sets of lives.
Since the subject noun differences is
needs to be something between the two plural, the verb must be are rather than
is.
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sentences to tie them together so that one
flows to the other. ) 批注 [7writing6]: Avoid the use of It
is an undeniable fact. L