文档介绍：PERSONAL STATEMENT
by Li Qiang
该文原稿语言干涩,且很多地方表达错误,或不合作者本意。试看第一段剖析。
A senior student at the business school headed by China's tough Prime Minister, I will graduate next year with a diploma to be conferred by the Quebec Association of Certified General Accountants in Canada in the first joint educational program of its kind between China and a foreign country. To build up a great career upon this rare privilege, I am now applying for advanced studies in your quality program, hoping that I can someday e one of China's top accounting experts.(原文初看不是很差,但语言晦涩干巴,经不起推敲。改后稿行文简洁流畅,第一段开门见山,把该作者最精彩的地方一下子推倒最前景上,使人立即对申请者刮目相看。)
At Tsinghua, the country's most valued cradle of advanced talents that houses my favored School of Business Management, I have been head and shoulders above(远远超出) most of my fellow students in my class of 122. I ranked among the top 2 per cent in macroeconomics, top 3 per cent in microeconomics, top 5 per cent in international finance, and top 2 per cent in international trading. My performance in mathematics has been particularly strong, with my GPA in related courses probably the very best in the class. The CGA diploma pletion of 12 courses taught in English, of which I have finished eight, with a GPA better than that of most others.
My distinguished academic performance won me the privilege of being chosen as the only Special-Training Student in my class of 12