文档介绍：PERSONAL STATEMENT
By Han Liang
本文原作者是个非常优秀的人才,可他不会包装自己。其自述最大的毛病是没有突出重点。在进行任何有意义的修改前,必须把内容完全重新组织,并在相应的段落开头加上有效的topic sentence。
Acclaimed as a prodigy, I entered into one of China's Ivy League universities at 14 and joined the country's topmost scientific research institution as a graduate student at 19. Now an experienced engineer at 26, I would like to scale still higher intellectual heights by undertaking advanced studies that I hope would put me firmly on the cutting edge of scientific development.(读者可以体会一下这样的起始段落有什么好处。)
I have demonstrated a keen mind since my early childhood. For years, I consistently outperformed all of my classmates in such challenging subjects as mathematics, physics and chemistry. I was thus chosen to represent either my school or my city in a variety of provincial and national contests of academic skills, in which I won numerous prizes. This impressive academic record put me on academic acceleration several times. That not only enabled me to finish my primary and secondary education in eight instead of the usual twelve years but also sent me at 14 to a privileged class for the gifted at the Chinese University of Science and Technology, a major cradle of the country's scientific and technological talents.
After two years of basic training in the gifted class, I chose electrical engineering as my major puter software programming as my minor, convi