文档介绍：雅思小作文笔记(个人整理内容最全)
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文章结构:
Introduction,1-2sentences,rewritethequestion
Body1,1+Xsentences,第一句总体概括,X句具体介绍数字
Body2,
雅思小作文笔记(个人整理内容最全)
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文章结构:
Introduction,1-2sentences,rewritethequestion
Body1,1+Xsentences,第一句总体概括,X句具体介绍数字
Body2,1+Xsentences,第一句总体概括,X句具体介绍数字
Conclusion,1-2sentences,第一句介绍总数(可不写);第二句做总结。
开头段:1-2句,转述原题
转述原题3法:①添加单词②删除单词③替换单词(注意:改动不需过多,3-4处,即可)
原题一句变两句,两句变一句。全部改写,要保证语法、句型的正确性。开头段的时态:永远一般现在时
【原文】
Thetableshowstheresultsofasurveyin2004whichaskedundergraduateandpostgraduatestudentsofaUKuniversitywhethertheyweresatisfiedwiththefacilitiesattheuniversity.
【改写】
Thediagramgivesabreakdown(明细表)aboutdifferentattitudesamongundergraduateandpostgraduatestudentstowardsequipmentsofaUKcollegeintheyear2004.
【原文】Thechartbelowshowsthedifferentlevelsofpost-schoolqualificationsinAmericaandtheproportionofmenandwomenwhoheldthemin1999.
改后:Thebarchartillustratesthediverselevelsofpost-schoolcertificatesintheUSandthepercentageofmalesandfemalesholdingthemin1999.
Levelout(变得水平;持平)
Example:In1985,earningsleveledoutamongstpeoplewithaMaster’sdegreeandwithaDoctoraldegree.
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Fromthispoint/2000onwards……用于有标志性节点的链接
…and…
inMarch,2002=inthemonthofMarch,2002
afterpeakingat90millionthefollowingyear,第二年达到了顶峰,避免再用时间重复thesecategoryhadfallenbacktothe1995figureby2000.
Thisrisewasparticularlynoticeablebetween1999and2000,duringwhichtimetheuseof…..tripled.
Overthefollowingthree/twoyearsdaysmonths
Remain分词remainedremaining
remainder剩余物剩余部分
In1980Australiausedcoalasthemainelectricitysource(50units),andtheremainderwasproducedfromnaturalgas,hydropower(eachproducing20units)andoil(whichproducedonly10units).
Theremaining40unitswereproducedlargelyfromoilandnuclearpower,……
+from(第一时间)to(第二时间)/between(第一时间)and(第二时间)
对比链接词:
Bycontrastsimilarlyincomparison
以上句子间对比,句内对比while/whereas
%ofdegradationduetodeforestation,while/whereastheimpactofthison……wasminimal/waslesssignifican