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Introduction,1-2sentences,rewritethequestion
Bodyl,1+Xsentences,第一句总体概括,X句具体介绍数字
Body2,1+Xsentences,第一句总体概括,X句具体介绍数字
Conclusion,1-2sentences,第一句介绍总数(可不写);第二句做总结。
开头段:1-2句,转述原题
转述原题3法:①添加单词②删除单词③替换单词(注意:改动不需过多,3-4处,即可)
原题一句变两句,两句变一句。全部改写,要保证语法、句型的正确性。开头段的时态:永远一般现在时
【原文】
Thetableshowstheresultsofasurveyin2004whichaskedundergraduateandpostgraduatestudentsofaUKuniversitywhethec^hey^KereRsatisfie^Lw^ithlhefacilitie&^tXhe^niversity.
改写】
Thediagramgivesabreakdown(明细表)aboutdifferentattitudesamongundergraduateandpostgraduatestudentstowardsequipmentsofaUKcollegeintheyear2004.
【原文】Thechartbelowshowsthedifferentlevelsofpost-schoolqualificationsinAmericaandtheproportionofmenandwomenwhoheldthemin1999.
改后:Thebarchartillustratesthediverselevelsofpost-schoolcertificatesintheUSandthepercentageofmalesandfemalesholdingthemin1999.
Levelout(变得水平;持平)
Example:In1985,earningsleveledoutamongstpeoplewithaMaster'sdegreeandwithaDoctoraldegree.
句型、词汇、短语:
Asshowninthefirst/second……..,
Accordingtothe……..,
Overall,itcanbeseenthat
Thistableshowsastrikingdifference/similaritybetween
Themoststrikingfeatureofthegraphisthesuddenincreaseinthepopularityinthecomputergames.
Anotherfactworthnoticinginthegraphisthat…….后面接完整的句子如果要跟名词不加that
Anotherfactworthnoticinginthegraphisthehighcostoffuels.
Themostremarkablepointisthat…….
Thegraphshowsthedifferencebetweenthepercentages注意用复数ofmalesandfemalesdoingfull-timejobs.
在表示百分数时可以用percent或percentagepercentage的一个意思就是百分比(名词)就不能直接跟在数词后面,要表示"百分之36"时,只能说"a
PERCENTAGEof36"而不是"36PERCENTAGE"(因为percentage只能作名词);
前者用法是:数词+percent+of+sth;这时后面谓语的单复数以percent后面跟的主语为主,例如:
2percentoftheapples(这里是复数的可数名词)are(所以用复数)eaten.
2percentoftheapple(这里是单数,指的是一个苹果的一部分)is(用单数)eaten.
2percentofthewater(这里是不可数名词)is(单数)drunk.
后者的用法是Thepercentageof+sth+is,注意这里不管后面跟的是什么词都用is(这里忽略别的时态)
Thepercentageofthestudentsis46.
Thepercentageofthewateris46.
Thesizeofthepopulationwillincreaseshaplyinthefuture.
....…]%.
Asmall/largeproportionofstudentsare……..
InBritainpeoplespentthesmallestamountofmoneyonpersonal+sth.
大量alarge/considerable/substantialnumberof可数alarge/considerable/substantialamountof不可数
少量asmall/limited/tinynumberofafewofasmall/limited/tinyamountofalittleof
Lotsof/alotof/plentyof即可用于可数也可用于不可数
过去一段时间内的情况变化,用过去式。
Theamountofenergyconsumedbyindustrydoulbedduringthelastdecadeofthetwentiethcentury.
Theshareofglobalresourcesconsumedbypoorestcountrieswentdownduringthatperiod.
AisonlymarginallygreaterthanthatofB.
Doubletriplen,adj,vi,vt
Therewasasubstantialdeclineinthe……
HousingprisesintheUKfellconsistentlyfrom2010to2012.
After2007,thehousingpricesintheUKfellconsistentlyinthefollow^ingtw,oyears,bottomingatattheendofthisperiod,
Inthefollowingyear表达时间的小词
时间区间表达:
Theperiodbetween10o'clock/1991and12o'clock/2000.
Then,from1910to1998,itremainedstable.
Then,inthenext20years/20hours,thenumberof……/thequantityof…….
Overthisspanof28yearsDuringthe28-yearperiod
Fromthispoint/2000onwards用于有标志性节点的链接
...and...
inMarch,2002=inthemonthofMarch,2002
afterpeakingat90millionthefollow^ingyear,第二年达到了顶峰,避免再用时间重复thesecategoryhadfallenbacktothe1995figureby2000.
Thisrisewasparticularlynoticeablebetween1999and2000,duringwhichtimetheuseoftripled.
Overthefollowingthree/twoyearsdaysmonths
Remain分词remainedremaining
remainder剩余物剩余部分
In1980Australiausedcoalasthemainelectricitysource(50units),andtheremainderwasproducedfromnaturalgas,hydropower(eachproducing20units)andoil(whichproducedonly10units).
Theremaining40unitswereproducedlargelyfromoilandnuclearpower,
+from(第一时间)to(第二时间)/between(第一时间)and(第二时间)
对比链接词:
Bycontrastsimilarlyincomparison
以上句子间对比,句内对比while/whereas
%ofdegradationduetodeforestation,while/whereastheimpactofthisonwasminimal/wasless
significant.
连接词:
atfirst=initialy,then,afterthat,fromthispointonwards,finally=eventually,subsequently,afterwards
Morespecifically=moreprecisely
时态和语法:B1P243
Teacher'payremainedthebiggerscost,reaching50%oftotalspendingin1991andendingat15%,有些不可
constituted/represented20%ofthetotalin2001.
没有给出具体年代时间说明描述的是一般情况,用一般现在时态。Standsat,stoodat给出具体年代的数据,过去的用过去时,将来的用将来时。
Will+动词原形:willcontinuetoriseinthenexttwodecades.
Aisexpectedtocontinue,reaching40tonnesin2030.
Thisrisingtrendisexpectedtocontinue,reaching40tonnesin2030.
Constant恒定的;不变的;constantly不断的经常的
Consistentconsistently始终如一的;
词汇整理:
趋势:sawanupwardtrend/witnessedadownwardtrendsawanoppositetrend
上升:increasedto20%reached4000/thehighestpointin1980soar/soaredtorocketedto
下降:fellconsistentlyfrom2001to2010droppedswiftlytoplummetedto
波动:remainedstable/constant一个是稳定一个是不变注意区别remainedrelativelystable
Reachedaplateauat…….
Fluctuatedbetween25hoursand35hours
steadysteadily一adj一副词
预期:描述将来的变化趋势
Amoredramaticriseispredictedbetweem2020and2025.
Thefigureisexpectedtoreach23%by2020.
Theproportionofinallthreecategoriesisexpectedtoincreasetoalmost25%.
第一用is,因为是一个数字第二expected/projected/predicted后要有to,to后用原形动词超过:surpassovertake
Thegrowthrateofisexpectedtosurpassthatofby2030.
倍数:istwiceasmanyasisthreetimesasmany/muchasdoubledtripled
thegraphsshowathreefoldincreaseinthenumberof...该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。
鲜明对比:beinmarkedcontrastwith
Thisisinmarkedcontrastwith1990when60%ofthosewhoheldanundergraduatediplomaweremen.
Thisnewtrendisinmarkedcontrastwiththetrenditexperiencedinthe1980s.
Whereas而while/whilst而同时前者对比更加强烈
Line:变化趋势+明显的结论,结论可以在第二段第三段,但要给结尾留内容。
描述重点:起点终点;最高值最低值;变化趋势:上升下降线的相交变化趋势的缓急
例题:BlP226239/242J9pl68(未来变化趋势)/J6p30J8T4
练****J5P30/163句型词汇:
Justunder,justover,increase/declinerepidly,experienceaslightgrowth/asharprise两个都做名词increasedmoreslowly用于开头描述起点:
Petrolandoilarethedominantfuelsourcesthroughoutthis25-yearperiod,with35unitsusedin1980,过去分词表被动和过去,
In1979beefwasbyfarthemostpopularofthesefoods,withabout225gramsconsumedperpersonperweek.
Carsremainedtopamongthemodesinthe15years,withitsaveragemilesincreasingconsiderablyfrom3,199in1985to4,806in2000.
In1940theproportionofpeopleaged65ormorestoodatonly50%inJapan,approximately7%inSwedenand9%,有单边趋势:
Theamountofgoodstransportedbywaterwasconstant(adj.)at40milliontonnesfrom1974to1978,andthenitshowedasubstantialgrowth,risingtoalmost60milliontonnesafterwhichitplateauedforabout20yearsbeforestartingtorise/declinegraduallyagain.
用于描写折线,有小的、不易描述的波动:
Theof....hasbeenrisensteadilyoverthe20yearperiodwhilethe....hasbeenindeclineoverthesame
periodwithaslightincreaseinpopularitysince1985.
Inspiteofsomefluctuationsintheexpectedpercentages,,超过某一量:
Theconsumptionofchicken,ontheotherhand,shownedan/aupward/downwardtrend,.
Thepriceremained/:
Waterusedintheindustrialanddomesticsectorsalsoincreased,buttheamount/:
Aisexpected/projected/predictedtoreach..
Aisprojectedtomorethandoubledby2015.
Theproportionofelderlypeopleinallthreecountriesisexpectedtoincreasetoalmost20%in2020.
Inspiteofsomefluctuationsintheexpectedpercentages,theproportionofolderpeoplewillcontinue(will后接动词原形,构成一般将来时)toriseinthenexttwodecades.
描述两条很相近的线:
,Ashowedaninitialfall,Bshowedagradualincrease,,whereasafter2014,:
After/somefluctuations/aslightincrease/adecline/,,whiletheotherswillriseslightlyafter2025.
J9范文第三段:
Table:描述重点:单项的变化趋势(增加、减少)或大幅增加大幅减少不同项目间数字的大小介绍不同数字结论写单项和总数的关系
Howerver,atthesametime,thepercentageofstudentpopulationwhocamefromabroadremainedalmostunchangedbetween1928and1985,being5%and6%repectively,butrosemarkedlyafterthat,sothatby2008foreignstudentsrepresented20%ofthetotal.
例题1:J6T1
重点准备:用于描写项目不多的题目,会配合其他图形出题!三个项目写了三句话!
Thetableillustratesthedifferencesinagricultureconsumption(一个名词)insomeareasoftheworldbycontrastingtheamountofirrigatedlandinBrazil()withthatintheUK().
ThismeansthatahugeamountofwaterisusedinagricultureinBrazil,andthisisreflectedinthefigureforwaterconsumptionperperson:356mcomparedwithonly8mintheCongo.
Withapopulationof176million,thefiguresforBrazilindicatehowhighagriculturalwaterconsumptioncanbeinsomecountries.
例题2:
,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.
Familytype
Proportionofpeoplefromeachhouseholdtypelivinginpoverty
Singleagedperson
6%(54,000)
Agedcouple
4%(48,000)
Single,nochildren
19%(359,000)
Couple,nochildren
7%(211,000)
Soleparent
21%(232,000)
Couplewithchildren
12%(933,000)
Allhouseholds
11%(1,837,000)
红色为出题故意调整选项,为一类!
ThetablegivesabreakdowncfthedifferenttypesoffamilywhowerelivinginpovertyIhAustraliain19S9.
Onavenage,11%ofallhousahotds,,&venthoseconsistingofonlyonaparentorasingleadulthadalmostdoublethisproportionofpoorpeople,with21%and19%respectively.
CouplesgenerallytendedtobebatterpfftwithlowerpovertylevelsforcOdpledwithoutchildren(7%)thanthosewithahHdren(12%).Itisnoticeablethattorbath
typesphhpuBehofdW)children,ahigherthanaverageproportionwerelivinginpovertyatIhtstime,
OlderpeopleweregeneraUylesslike妙tobspoor,thoughonc&agp和thetrendfavouredeldaarl^couples(only4%)ratherthansingleelderlypeople(6%).
Ovenalithelablesugg93t6thathouseholdsoFsingl白adultaatidthose-withchildrenweremorelikelytobelivinginpovertythanthoseconsisttngofcouples*
总结:
。becomprisedof由…组成
comprisingalmost2millionpeoplewhowerelivingin
overallthetablesuggeststhatweremorelikelytobelivinginpovertythanthose
例题3:J6T2
Avcrflgc<lhtnniiceIomilesperpersaiiperyear+byniod^ortravel
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235
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范文:表格有很多项需要做比较的,分类比较!
Ingeneral,themodesareclassifiedintotwokindsintermsofaveragemilestravelledperpersonperyear:,longdistancebus,train,-yearperiod,withitsaveragemilesincreasingconsiderablyfrom3,199in1985to4,,soaveragemilestravelledinthistwomodesalmosttripled.
Travelsbywalking,bicycleandlocalbuslosttravelers',droppingfrom429to274,whilethenumberofmilesbywalkingandbikefellslightlyfrom255to237andfrom51to41respectively.
Overall,thenumberofmilestravelledbytheaverageperpersonperyearrosefrom4,740milesin1985to6,475milesin2000,withtheincreaseofcaraccountingforalmostallofthatincrease,
例题4:J5T4
Thetablebelowgivesinformationaboutundergroundrailwaysystemsinsixcities.
BalltfflySysltnift
KO
Loniloti
1眈
394
卉5
fnk
1900
刖
1191
ToVw
1曲
15S
IW7
WasMcgtaiDC
1976
144
Kyoto
I剜
il
4S
2001
2B
50
|
范文1比较项目之间的区别
Thetabledemonstratesthedataregardingthesubwaysysteminsixcities,includingDateopened,kilometersofrouteandpassengersperyear(inmillions).
IntermsofDateopened,Londonhasthemosttime-honored(1863)subwaysystemamongthesixcitieswhilesubwaysysteminLosAngelesisthenewestoneopenedin2001.(最老,最新)SystemsinParisandTokyowereopenedin1900and1927,,systemsinWashingtonDCandKyotowereopenedin1976and1981differently.
Asforthesize/lengthoftherailwaysystem,Londonstillranksthefirst,