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Essay题材类型为athletics体育运动。
招生官对本篇Essay范文的点评与分析
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申请哥伦比亚大学的Essay范文EssaybyScottPelletier
,Iturnaround;thereisnoneed
,receivinghigh-fives
fromnotonlymyteammates,
myteammatesknowingIthrewastrike,withouthavingtoseeit,feelsamazing.
Ontheotherhand,itcanprovealittleembarrassingwhenapinisleftstanding.
WhenIwasinninthgrade,Itriedoutandmadethefreshmenbasketball
,myheightof5'2"wasan
opportunitysport,whereitdoesn'tmatterifyou'reshort,fat,orevendeaf,
dumb,
teammatesandIgettorelaxandhavefun.
Ongooddays,itissatisfyingtoknowthatIcanthrowastrikeonanyshot.
,Ihavealsoexperiencedthe
"agony"
gutterballs;claimingit"hitmyleg"touseasanexcuse.
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Itisamazingtoseehowalthoughasindividualswedon'thavealotin
common,yetasteammates,-portive;wecheer
whensomeonedoeswellandgiveencouragementwhenoneofusthrowsa
,IenjoyhelpingtheyoungerJVbowlersperfecttheir
toimprovehisapproachtotheshot(unfortunately,myeffortshadlimited
success).
,whenwewentto
theWestchester/Putnamsectionals,IwasreallynervousandIdidnotbowlup
,junioryear,wequalifiedagain
,alongwith
myconfidence,
,IhadtogiveaspeechforMuAlpha
Theta(MathHonorSociety)andIwaspleasantlysurprisedwiththeeaseIfeltat
basketball(nocheerleaders),formeitwillalwaysbewonderfulwaytospend
anafternoon.
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