文档介绍：书面表达突破(五)
——阐述主体类
原题再现
据统计,目前我国有数以百万计的中学生在国外求学。面对中学生“出国热”这一现象,社会对此有不同的看法。请你以“Studying Abroad”为题,写一篇短文简单分析这一现象并谈谈自己的看法。
注意:词数100左右。
写作模板
学生习作
Nowadays,there are more and more现象. It is estimated that现象的具体数据. Why have there been so many现象? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows:
The first one is原因1. The second one is 原因2.
In my opinion,.
Studying Abroad
Nowadays,there are more and more middle school students studying abroad. It is estimated that tens of thousands of Chinese students are studying in foreign countries. Why have there been so many middle school students studying abroad? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows:
The first one is that many parents believe that education abroad is far better than the domestic. And at least students can learn the foreign language faster and better. The second one is that many people in our country have e much wealthier than before. They have the money to send their children to study abroad.
In my opinion,sending children studying abroad is not a bad they like to study there,they can acquire a lot of things.
名师点评
本文是用三段论的方式进行写作的,第一段提出问题,其中用了It is estimated that...和Why have...等较为复杂的句式;第二段说明理由,用词确切,如far better than the domestic应为较高级的词汇;第三段发表自己的看法,使用了含有条件状语从句的复合句,使文章的档次得以提高。总之,该文要点齐全,符合要求,但美中不足的是第三段中sending children...matter若改为it is not a bad matter sending chi
ldren studying abroad 则更常