文档介绍：英语写作训练
Wu Guangmei
WRITING
A Good Writing(佳作欣赏)
As is known to all, computers play an important role in our daily life. It’s convenient to have a chat with friends.
We can not only search information, but also go shopping on puters.
On the other hand, computers have many disadvantages. First of all, they will waste our money. Secondly, they will have a bad effect on our study. Thirdly, they will do harm to our eyes.
写作训练的步骤
,列举大纲;
,写出句子;
,确保连贯;
,卷面整洁。
仔细审题,列举大纲
,无明显语法错误,意思完整;
,提示词汇仅供参考;
,意思连贯,语言通顺,书写规范;
4. 开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
步骤一:句子内容完整性 将所给信息整合成5个句子
1 得到信任,高兴,激动;
2 不仅是知识的考查,而且是诚信的考查;
3 更放松,会考得更好。
4 一些学生***;
5 无法及时获得老师的帮助。
2. A test of honesty
3.
5.
步骤二:句子所需的词汇,短语和句型
1 得到信任,高兴,激动;
2 不仅是知识的考查,而且是诚信的考查;
3 更放松,会考得更好。
4 一些学生***;
5 无法及时获得老师的帮助。
1. trust
典型病例
3. 主谓一致问题
(主格、宾格)问题
添加过渡,确保连贯
Thanks to
As a result of
Because of
Due to
因为
添加过渡,确保连贯
what’s more
moreover/furthermore
in addition
besides
另外(递进)
添加过渡,确保连贯
therefore
so
thus
结果